Second Enstallment

While I’m waiting for feedback on my first book, I am trying to start on my second. I have literally had 5 different intros and I’m not stoked about any of them. Of course, this is a continuation of the first one and I don’t want to start it immediately after the first one. The […]

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Waiting

Hello all! The waiting game is so tedious… Sending out my unfinished work, having people read it and then waiting for the feedback. I would rather have my feet nibbled off by gerbils. I have already gotten some feedback, though! Some good, some not so good, but that’s how it is. It’s so hard to […]

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Better, right?

Terrible writing example from last blog: She opened her eyes to see painted clouds on a blue ceiling. She rubbed her eyes and looked around the room. She was in her old bedroom from when she was a girl. Everything seemed so slow, like it was playing a memory in slow motion. She slid off the small bed that she questioned on […]

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Bad, Laura..

She opened her eyes to see painted clouds on a blue ceiling. She rubbed her eyes and looked around the room. She was in her old bedroom from when she was a girl. Everything seemed so slow, like it was playing a memory in slow motion. She slid off the small bed that she questioned […]

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Omit.

Hello! Okay, I decided to start writing again. It’s so hard to put away sometimes. For those of you who have read Fliers, at least half way through, you might remember the B&B, with Lana and stuff. Harold shows up out of no where and kills her, for.. some reason… but, be confused NO MORE! […]

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Car Accident Cont…

So I re-wrote it. I swear, I’m like a different person now. Some of the things I look back and read, I’m like… “wow.. this is embarrassing..”  Thankful now that I know more and can correct those mistakes. A lot of mistakes.. like, almost chapters worth. Anyway, I am pretty proud of what I set […]

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Car Accident

So I am at a part where my characters have been involved in a car accident. The way I originally had this written was that Gia basically pulls the car off of Sydona. Biggest problem with this, is that my book is a Third-person limited, and we should not be in the view point of […]

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